P4

Rough Edit Feedback

Charlie:

"Really smooth animation!"

"That walking shot tho"

"I like how abstract it gets."

"a bit of fixing needed, u kno"

Robert:

"After Effects is a bit too long"

"Animate clearly unfinished"

"need more variety/shot types"

Joe:

"Needs more scenes"

Cian:

"The art was very nice and editing was nice"

"The walking went on for too long"

Phoebe:

"Walk cycle goes on for... a while"

"Visually interesting (looks cool)"

"More shots"

Darcey:

"The cycle is a bit to long"

"Needs to include a bit more"

"(something weird happens to their legs?)"


Final Edit